Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 12:45pm
Hi Bob and Alyx, As usual your writing is absolutely superb. I was
especially impressed with your version of Shakespeare's very dramatic episode where Madam McBeth washes her hands repeatedly as a result of her insanity after killing the King. Your description was perfect as Harry sits in the shower washing blood from his hands and none of the wizards know how to handle this situation. Now what are you going to do to aliviate this problem. He must after all fight Voldie.
In general and even though Harry is a very well balanced personality an episode such as this can do a number on his equilibrium an so affect the story profoundly. I can't wait to read what you intend to do about this episode.
Aaron W posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 12:29pm
To the 4 time llama leaping champ Alyx and the one and only Bullet Bob. Welcome back! I'm such a fan of the X-men and Harry Potter. I'm glad that you're continuing your stories. I've been a fan since your Sunrise/Sunset series you're notorious for having unique parings. You're Luna/Draco paring in the Sunrise/Sunset series was great and well written. and having Hermione and Neville being interested in each other will work too. I love see how Harry doesn't suck up and go on (well he does, but he has no choice, he learn the hard way the so called #1 rule: "When you need help and you can't turn to anybody you turn to the one person who never lets you down: yourself") He's still a work in progress and he killed Lucius and Bellatrix i wonder how Draco is going to react to this.
Anyway I like the crossover and how you written it. So if Magneto isn't going to be in this fic, How about the Black Queen Selene? That is one woman who's evil to the core and a powerful witch to boot. The X-men and Selene have faced each other before (and currently in a storyline they're facing her now, and she's got an army of her own) I like to see what happens next.
I like how Ginny and Harry are getting close together. She's right Harry do needs someone to care for him, Ginny's finishing what Jean and the rest of the X-men started, letting Harry know that he's loved. Although with is panic attack after he killed Lucius and Bella will set him back, it's good to see that he's not immediately better, he's been through a lot and he's not going to be completely better anytime soon, and he doesn't have time with Riddle breathing down his neck.
Glad to see another chapter of this and love to see what you do next. keep it up
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 12:07pm
This was very fun. The part I'm really looking forward to, though, is the point where the students force a confrontation on Dumbledore. That will be the point where he knows that things are now completely off-track in terms of him keeping to whatever precious stupid plan he has in mind.
A day with a new Bobmin chapter is a happy day indeed.
sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 11:57am
Thank you for the update. I will consider it a holiday gift :) It's a wonderful story and just keeps getting better. Watch out for the llamas and the penguins :) Have a wonderful holiday!
Darak1 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 11:53am
Not writing for us? Not even the author notes ? Oh man and all this time I tought you were addressing actual readers ...
rosiegirl posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 11:39am
Another fantastic chapter. Loved Logan's reaction to the Goblins, his kind of people indeed. Poor Harry, looking forward to Draco's reaction- that won't end well....for Draco. Happy Holidays and thanks for the present!
Clell65619 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 11:16am
- Very nice. I wish you could have gotten to Dumbledore's defense of the Death Nibblers at the school, but I'm sure that will come next time.
- That was possibly the goriest Bella death I've ever read. Well done.
amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 10:45am
I find it intriguing how Hermione and Crew are standing up and working on their own, without Harry. That is possibly the most hopeful thing that Harry should see about his future in the wizarding world. This next generation of leaders(?) are working with him, not hiding behind him. In fact, they are going to work even without him, if necessary. This should be a good comfort and inspiration for him.
An interesting view of the Goblin nation, but really, a 1hr ride on that train? Seems quite long.
Thanks for writing, I enjoy this story.
Mark Safransky posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 10:11am
Another great chapter, and just in time for Christmas! Thank you though for posting it, really enjoyed Harry laying the smackdown on Bella and Lucius. I can see there will be some repercusions from this, but little ones except for Dumbledore. He's really cocked everything with Harry up. Can't wait to see what Harry's friends have planned for the Death Eaters in the castle. Going to be fun, especially what they have planned for Snape. Hope it comes soon!
Milarqui posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 9:54am
Very enjoyable new chapter of this wonderful story! It was certainly refreshing that everyone was so willing to go and tell Dumbledore to screw up with his plans, as well as the visit into the Goblins' city. Also good that Malfoy & Lestrange are dead, but bad that Harry was so affected by it (understandable, though). As for the scene with the Minister, it was very funny how Professor X was able to modify the Minister's memories so easily. Please, continue with the story, it's one of the best I've ever read!
minervakitty posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 9:52am
It's sad that Harry has to kill. Will Harry talk with Xavier and Jean? I'm a bit curious on what the goblins would do to the money of the Malfoy and of Bellatrix? Alyx, what are you going to do with Bob in the next disclaimer? Will the X-men or Harry manage to get Snape's horcrux? It would be very amusing if they manage to take the booby traps off of it and hold that over Snape.
Aki posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 8:53am
Enjoyed the update and looking forward to the next one. If Bellatrix and Lucius are salvageable, perhaps Dumbledore thinks that Voldemort just needs a good spanking to set him right. Hmm, can't wait to see what Hermione will do with the list of names and the ultimatum she's going to issue.
QOShea posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 6:11am
Nice chapter, glad to see it!
I wonder what would happen if Harry grabbed Dumbles by the beard and tried to teleport just the beard. *grin*
Then apply to Voldemort's head.
vl100butch posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 3:52am
Dumbles doesn't know it, but his entire plan is about to come crashing down around him!!!! I love the idea of having Xavier at Hogwarts for a while....opens up all sorts of opportunities to get rid of the Death Nibblers....
firstname.lastname@example.org posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 2:11am
Outstanding chapter!!!! George W Bush the amazing technicolor troll sounds like a bad disease nobody wants!!!! Will we be seeing more Harry and Goblin interaction???? Will we get to see Professor X walk again???? Great job integrating Harry Potter and Xmen together!!!! Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)
louisjventer posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 1:16am
nice.took awhile but worth it.
Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 12:18am
Very good chapter. Can't wait until next one comes out.
LDA posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 12:17am
Loved the new chapter and the realistic way Harry snapped after killing Bella and Malfoy.
the one pairing I'd love to see in this fic would be Harry/Kitty Pryde... even if you go the same ole same ole and hook him up with Ginerva I'll keep reading since I can't get enough of your work.
Kris posted a comment on Monday 21st December 2009 10:15pm
OH HAPPY DAY!!!! A new chapter to a truly wonderful literary masterpiece! This calls for cookies! Peanut, chocolate chip, butter scotch, oatmeal raisin, sugar, and the funky little ones with the Hershey’s kiss on top! I would send you a few hundred dozen, but know my family will be thanking you for the next week, while bouncing around on a sugar high.
I loved the chapter, and the dynamics between Jean and Harry. It's so hard for Harry to know how to respond since he's not only never had a family, but had so little demonstrated affection in his life. You're portraying him perfectly, and you had me chocking up when Ginny was explaining what she saw when she looked into the future and how their relationship could and would work.
Thank you again! I love the story and will gladly curse all the naggers who ask you to update with backward toes.
PS: Still love the llamas!
Steven Anderson posted a comment on Monday 21st December 2009 8:30pm
I missed this chapter arriving. Nice work. I am glad the pace seems to be picking up a bit. I thank you for continuing to write interesting stories of a good length.