hpfirecracker posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 5:24am
For your problem of destroying good ole Voldie. Have you thought about just having him a foot note or just in passing. this way you can consentrate on the conflict between Harry and the rest. I'm enjoying your story very much. I could see Harry in the jump jet, and the expression of joy on his face. I could see many things in my minds eye has I was reading it. You and Alyx are wonderful storry tellers. Thank you for sharing. By the way Dumbledores Army and its sequeal are my favorite stories. Thank you
kb0 posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 11:20pm
Another lovely chapter, thanks for sharing! For some reason I didn't get a notification, but then, that's why I come look here from time to time.
So, Logan died and "rebooted"? An interesting way to look at his powers, but I guess as long as you don't separate his head from his body, that makes sense.
Poor Harry... On the one hand, he's got Ginny helping him to understand that someone really does care for him. Then on the other, Dumbledore is making a mess of things (or at least perceived to be).
Nice touch with Charles manipulating the Minister and the Aurors. Yep, just ignore those silly Muggles over there behind the curtain, Mr Minister. ;)
I look forward to the next chapter in this saga. In the meantime, I've got a story to go work on. Happy Christmas!
Kevin (or kb0)
ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 8:54pm
Let me know when you find the penguins, I think they're languishing! (just kidding, lol).
Another enjoyable chapter. I rather liked your little 'battle' between Trixie and Lucy... nice of Harry to kick their butts - and to have a very realistic reaction to what he did!
Starlingswings posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 8:15pm
I'm sending you a Coffe Cup of Imminent Doom. Not only can you throw the coffee in flamers' faces, you can also conjure horrible deaths with the right amount of sugar and they'll be done. Benefits inculde not getting arrested, as people won't know it's you. There are only two in existence; yours and the one I made my mother.
hordac85 posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 1:15pm
excellent.Keep it up.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 8:00am
I have to admit that I loved Prof. Xavier doing that "Obe-Wan" number on Scrimgeour and his aurors. That was a very nice touch indeed.
Mickey posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 7:05am
Very nice although I can't see any adultsin the wizarding world (orat least any non-hypocritical adult) being shocked at Xavier affecting the Minister's memory, or Xavier and the X-men letting any hypocritical ones get away with it if they do express shock.
Alysson posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 7:02am
As a new reader, I have to say: A brilliant adventure/romp on the wild side, and a great chapter (which has cheered me up immensely). Well, I don't actually have to say anything, but I want to.
I'm not usually interested in Harry/Ginny or crossover fics, but this one has got me going (and coming back for more.) That really is about the best compliment I can pay an author, to say I want more, please. The disclaimers are fun, too (what can I say, I'm a fan of Monty Python).
I particularly like the idea that Logan finds Goblin attitudes in tune with his own. It's odd, I like the nice, clear-cut attitude to justice that the Goblins have, too ... even if they can't make a decent cup of tea to save their lives.
As a side note, I've already tried crossing the energy streams, but I still can't get the llama stains out of the wallpaper. Any advice?
As a point of discussion (and not as a suggestion/request) I find myself wondering what would happen if Rogue grabbed hold of a wizard? Would she become magical, or would the wizard merely suffer horribly? (one can only hope, after all).
I also find myself wondering what would happen if you dumped Logan in with The Marauders/Twins? Oh dear!
Please keep up the good work.
maddy143ded posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 1:42am
an excellent first blood.
Full_Pensieve posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2009 1:35am
Very interesting and well-executed. You're doing a great job here of giving a spare description of various events but in a way that raises interest; the dragon and the goblins come to mind. The little insert about goblin portkeys is a good example. I noticed that you like to do really quick POV inserts in mid-stream, like giving us Dumbledore's perspective on events right after a bit of dialogue before going back to third-person omniscient. Seems to be more of that here than in Power of the Press, which I liked quite a lot. It's a fair technique for simplifying exposition, but does sometimes take the mystery out of things. A good balance of action and character development, and the growing H/G is deftly handled. Having Pomfrey offer to fix Xavier totally caught me off guard for some reason. Anyway, interesting and seductive; looking forward to more. Cheers, FP
webdoc posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 7:15pm
Loved reading the latest chapter, but then I've always enjoyed reading your work.
My only complaint is with the new site software, it doesn't allow for auto login like it did before (yes I am lazy and having to keep typingmy username/pwd is a pain in the a$$)
Anyway keeo up the great work, I won't tell you to hurry up, I'd rather continue to read good stories like you've done so far than quick short crap stuff other writers are puting out.
darthloki posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 5:45pm
Oh, poor Harry. :(
Professor McGonagall laughed. She manged to control it and look stern for a few seconds before she gave up and began to chortle.
*giggles at the above*
Finbar posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 5:23pm
Great chapter! I do find Harry's descent and ascent into and out of madness to be kind of interesting. However, I'm thinking that it cant last much longer without becoming a bit ....laboured.
Any word on Harry's Duck billed Platypus animagus form?
Charles Slone posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 5:03pm
I am glad to see that once again a great story has life bleed into it....but given how Patch 3.3 recently came out and Icecrown is open to us all now, i have a feeling we won't see much for a while ;)
Death to Arthas.....oh and great chapter
Ken Norton posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 4:44pm
Great chapter. I enjoy the way that Xavier is assisting Harry with his abilities and how the Wizards and Witches responded to it.
Shepherd posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 1:18pm
Nice update. Good to see Harry and those around him trying to actively find ways to resolve the situation rather than waiting for circumstances to make the decisions forthem.
Bob Officer posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 1:16pm
I think I'll set back and be sated for the time being. However, I will eagerly await the next course of this fine meal.
I did like the sense of power Harry felt as he killed Lucius and Bella. The Normal way he felt after killing someone was good as was his regretful reaction of washing the blood of his hands in a mental breakdown.
Next up we, Will see Ginny's power to help him hell and come to terms with what he has done? As well and Dumble's loosing more control over the actions of others. Snape's own downfall is coming soon. That is always interesting... How to do it? Which one of his two masters will find out how he has been playing both of them for his own power games?
And make sure you next Llama is a Suri or I'll write a Fic AlPaca'ed with Puns and Jokes Just for you and Bob
Lordamnesia posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 12:57pm
Holy crap, a Technicolor Troll?!?! Those are an endangered species! Quick, wheres my flamethrower! Great new chapter!
pug54321 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 12:56pm
i love your stories but do u think you could write one story where harry is not abused,
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2009 11:01am
Great chapter filled with tension, intrigue, violence and some fun. Well done.
PS Can I borrow your pit?