Clell65619 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th March 2010 6:24pm
- The Hermione/Neville pairing seems to be becoming more common in stories where she isn't with Harry. The way you wrote them, they are very good together.
- Enjoying the story.
Aaron W posted a comment on Wednesday 24th March 2010 6:15pm
Another chapter from 5 time Llama racing champ Alyx and Bullet Bob. I love this one, seems like Harry is slowly healing from his injuries, and Hermione Neville and Ginny are part of his inner circle. Seems like his relationship with Dumbledore is all but nuked. It will be interesting to see what happens next.
I loved that Scott's eye beams destroyed the Horcurx. I liked Logan's nickname for Dumbledore, not to mention that Storm was the one who destroyed the Carrows. I was a bit surprised that Daphne and the Slyterin girls came to Harry for help it will be interesting to see who reacts to this and what comes next.
This new chapter was good, Hanging with Ginny has loosen him up a bit. Malfoy won't know what hit him. One thing though what happened with Blaise Zabini? I thought he wanted Harry dead.
Tommy boy got a plan to kidnapped Jean? whoo boy that would the worst mistake you'll make, Not only Harry will be angry, but so will Scott, Logan, Prof X, and the rest of the X-men. Not to mention Jean, who's really powerful in her own right. I can't wait to see this plan fail. This is a good chapter keep it up
sparrowhawknightmare posted a comment on Wednesday 24th March 2010 6:09pm
A wonderful chapter, excellent blend of angst, comedy and Logan :)
I still think it would be cool to see Jean go all Dark Phoenix on Voldemort's tush, but that's just me :)
I think I saw the penguins hiding under Rickman's bed. Try looking there for them.
KristinOhman posted a comment on Wednesday 24th March 2010 6:03pm
Loved it! Great to see Harry and Ginny figure things out and love Neville and Hermione.
Can't wait for another chapter!
atticghoul posted a comment on Sunday 21st March 2010 1:25pm
Love it so far.....a great take on two fantastic universes. I can't wait for the next chapter.....
harry/ginnylove posted a comment on Monday 15th March 2010 5:01pm
Please finish this story it is sooooo good, one of my favorites!!!
Hot48cricket posted a comment on Saturday 13th March 2010 9:37pm
I'll send penguins - if you promise NO technicolor troll!!!!!
I'm enjoying this story very much...
coronal posted a comment on Thursday 11th March 2010 11:59am
I've been thinking: isn't Excalibur based in Britain? Psylocke could do an AWFUL lot of damage, and so could her brother. Or perhaps Blackmoor castle is going to be the new home for Excalibur? Either way, can we possibly get the incredibly hot psychic ninja involved? Even just a little?
Anyway, what a great death for Bella. I'm looking forward to seeing just what Moldieshorts's response will be.
rums posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd March 2010 6:26pm
I like your Wolverine so much.. just has a badassness (is that a word) that i just can't get enough of...
Your Dumbledore character is great... different from the polarizing figure he plays against Voldemort... When people write the manipulative Dumbledore it usually makes him seem evil... your rendition just makes him seem dumb and naive.. which i find ironic cause everybody in the wizarding world feels they are naive compared to him...
I know you said no Magneto but are you bringing in other X-Men or even other heros like Captain Britain (he is Merlin's chosen), Scarlet Witch or Doctor Strange...
can't wait for the next one
Sond posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd March 2010 4:42am
Well I've finished all chapters now and fortunatly this one didn't end with a cliffy or I would've been quite pissed at myself for starting an unfinished story :D I really like this one and hope you haven't abandoned it yet, you're becoming my favourite authors of fanfic os I'm looking forward to more stuff :)
Graup posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 12:16am
I must confess that I rolled my eyes when I first started reading your story.
I mean, come on, Harry getting Mutant powers? (insert eye roll here)
However, I am beginning to change my tune. You are a tremendous story teller, and I am enjoying your work.
Thanks for the update.
Darkon posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 5:00am
Bwahahaha KKKKIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLL KKKKKKKIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLL!!!!! I love senseless violence. I'll let Ricky live but I get to obliterate all traces of Snivelus Greasy from him. Glad I live in a 30 yard thick lead dome. I'll send you 4 crates of doughnuts via naked delivery service 2 guys and 2 girls as well as 200 pounds of lime green jello if you update soon. *puppy-dog eyes*
Sond posted a comment on Thursday 25th February 2010 5:25am
Well it's been a while since I checked your website and now I noticed this one. Normally I hate reading fics that are still in progress cause I can't stand clifhangers but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt since the idea intrigued me a lot.
I like the first chapter and enjoyed reading a fic that is written intelligent and actually comes across quite believable even though it's an AU-Crossover.
Expect some praising in the next chapters and probably some cursing in the last :)
RhymesWithOrange posted a comment on Sunday 21st February 2010 8:52pm
I generally avoid crossover fics, because most of them are really kinda horrible. I was really bored today, though, laid up with a busted hand (this review is challenging to type, tell you what).
You've got a good story here. I like that it manages to be a crossover while still being an actual HP fic. Most crossovers have kitchen sink syndrome. I really like that Harry has some realistic PTSD to go along with the horrors that he's been through. It's one thing that I tried to do in my own limited adventures with fic, is try to actually talk about the damage he has to have sustained.
I'm looking forward to more chapters on this one.
Matt Moore posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 3:01pm
Can't wait for an update. This story is great. It's wonderful to read something that is both interesting and articulate-most of the fanfiction stories I've come across recently are a mish-mash of tortured prose and butchered grammar.
Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it with us.
Kris posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 9:58am
no matter how many times I read it, I still feel for Harry and want to smash something upside dumbledork's head...
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Chickenhawk posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 5:52pm
Penguins? Now wonder you can't find them, they are on a trip around the world. Penguins travelling the world - photography by Willy Puchner. I encountered them in Austria a couple of years ago.
sanotova posted a comment on Wednesday 17th February 2010 5:37am
Hmmm, I'm really interested in what Dumbledore's reaction to the statement of the students about the Death Eaters in the school is going to be, and I wonder how the rest of the staff are going to react. Are any more X-men going to show up? A hint maybe?
Donughts are ready to be sacrificed in tribute at any time.
Anyways I like the fic... strangely enough I like all the fics I've read that you two have written (nearly all of them), and I hope you keep up the amusing Disclaimer's.
Mozes posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd February 2010 9:26am
I have to ask this and if I seem like a newbie doing so... ah well life goes on.
What the heck is it will all the llamas? Having returning home from the war this past week I have been a couch- potato for a least 25% of each day re-reading some of your stories which were unfinished when i was shipped out and in each one I find such a reference at the beginning.
Now having asked my question I intend to return to the top of this page and to start reading a completely new story.
mwinter posted a comment on Saturday 30th January 2010 7:00pm
Just over a month now anytime soon with a new chapter would be great?!!!! Please.