lifeisaparadox posted a comment on Tuesday 9th November 2010 9:17am
Brilliant story, especially the talking exothermic reaction device.
Greg Webb posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 7:22pm
ok. last update was awhile ago. 4 months but whose counting. will we be getting something soon? all hallows sounds good to me.
phareigh posted a comment on Wednesday 27th October 2010 5:59pm
This was a really engaging story. I like the idea of wizards eventually being exposed through advanced technology and I never really understood Pepper-Up Potion as a cure for the common cold. You've just brought up a lot of things that I've never seen in other fics or considered before. I like where you're going with this story and can't wait to see what you have next. :)
wolfey posted a comment on Wednesday 20th October 2010 1:55pm
Well I am more in to harry/hermione. but I will read harry/ginny if its well written. Like there are currently three stories on ff.net I will read thats harry/ginny.
Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 18th October 2010 7:43am
3....2....1....BOOM!!!! How big of a hole did it leave?
DJ posted a comment on Saturday 16th October 2010 6:58am
I have sat down a few times to read his fic but real life kept getting in the way. Now that I have found the time I have to say tou did a grat job with it. I think this is an awsom mix of what it wrong & right with all the HP crew Ron is an a*s but not evil APWBD is out of his mind and a bunch more that you know because you wrote it. well done and I look forward to the rest.
csljr1 posted a comment on Thursday 14th October 2010 10:04pm
Love it - can't wait for more. That 'talking bomb' is brilliant :-)
amulder posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 8:41am
Your closing lines make me think of the opening chapter of "Starship Troopers"... He also was lobbing talking bombs about. Was that intentional?
(I think it's the 3rd time I've read this chapter... hoping for more soon!)
jafo2008 posted a comment on Sunday 10th October 2010 9:26am
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 5th October 2010 12:32pm
Dear Bob and Alyx, I just reread the story up to now. It is so good. I am really enjoying it. Like all your other readers I am looking forward to the next chapter. I want you to know I have a new appreciation of the hard work you do writing these stories. I just entered a story my daughter wrote into the computer and it took me over a week to enter 93 pages and I didn't have to think up the dialog and story line. Thank you for writing. I hope you are well. Take care. A fan for years. pms
Netta posted a comment on Monday 4th October 2010 8:58pm
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 3rd October 2010 2:42am
Not to rush you or make you do unspeakable things to inoffensive animals or anything, but after the umpteenth re-read, I'd love to see some more of the story. It would sort of be funny if you polish Voldie off with something stupid and focus on the revolution. I know you're not afraid to go big so go big and write the great reveal as well. I've never read a good story of the wizarding world revealing itself to the normals. You could do it, though. There are stories where the normals find or reveal the magicals, but a story where the magicals decide to reveal themselves would be great i think.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.
sinayah posted a comment on Saturday 2nd October 2010 7:16am
Hey Bob and Alyx! Hope you guys are doing well and busy writing. As much as I love your stories (big fan of DA and SC, Sun Series, and Wizards Fall) I wasnt sure about this one. Of course, by the third chapter I was fully engrossed in it and eagerly clicking the 'next' button. Now Ive come to the end and the button wont click :(. Just wanted to tell you both that I love your work and will be waiting for the next update, whenever it comes!
pug54321 posted a comment on Saturday 25th September 2010 8:31am
could someone get a message out to fanfiction.net that there site is acting up?
darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 10:06pm
oh noes! I are all caught up! What now? I am an exothermic reaction device. 3. I need to go to sleep now anyway. Thanks so far!
darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 8:15pm
Poor Harry. and I'm actually starting to feel sorry for poor Dumbles. I can't wait till Snape gets it!!! Fantastic, like usual!
darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 10:42am
Woohoo! Yay Ron!!
darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 9:32am
So, doesn't like Wizards, not crazy about Muggles... either he'll mature and realize mutants are only human too, or he'll start thinking they're a superior race. I'm betting he'll go through the second, then finally come out the first. Another point, I like how Dumbledore is a real man, not a dark, manipulative cardboard cut-out.
darksidhe posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 12:16am
Yay! Stormie! Can you make it a Harry/Storm fic? I know,I know, you can't. age difference. and that Ginny "character" ugh. oh well. Good story is good story, regardless of Harry's flavor of the week. Seriously... hasn't anyone noticed how most of Harry's non-OC girlfriends act so close to the same? Sorry, I'm tired and babbling. On with the story.
darksidhe posted a comment on Tuesday 21st September 2010 11:31pm
Pretty good. I like Harry's relationship with his new teachers and family. I do hope we see more of the X-Men side of things. Where are the other students in the school? How do Jean, Scott, and Logan have so much free time to spend with Harry?