megnicole posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 12:52pm
LOVED IT! I'm glad that Harry is FINALLY saying enough is enough with Dumbledore. The old asshole was getting aggrivating. Sheesh, he always thinks he is right doesn't he? Oh well, can't teach an old dog new tricks, i get the feeling he isn't changing. Ugh, those slytherin fathers are absolutely disgusting. Poor girls. Thank God Harry is helping them. I'm so glad they killed the Carrows, didn't they torture McGonagall in the canon story? Bastards. Haha! I loved the ending, I'm so glad Harrys friends think his power is cool.. cause it so is! Update Soon :)
Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 11:50am
A great chapter, keep it up.
Mariposa posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 10:57am
Awesome ending! Loved the chapter! This is such an entertaining story, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Rage and Light posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 10:34am
great chapter, I loved it and I look forward to more
Shepherd posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 10:10am
Nice update. It'll be interesting to see how Voldemort's plans for Jean pan out when Jean has already demonstrated the ability to read Snape's mind at will.
Peter Clark posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 9:39am
Wonderful - thanks!
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 9:00am
A wonderful follow up to what happened at the bank, but got to say, Dumbledore's continuing give anyone a chance thing is starting to drag on Harry there, and will have to wonder how many more times he'll say before Harry lashes out at him harder than ever before, or Dumbledore decides that for the greater good, Harry must be more controlled so the pure blood lines continue to survive, which was what it seemed a lot like in canon. Nice to see that he and Ginny are getting on well still, and fun to see Neville, the underdog and Hermione are getting on better as well, could have seen that pair working in canon if JKR'd given a fig about real relationships, instead of the cartoon ones she did. Will look forward to what happens next with the other girls, and if Snape will finally put the foot out of line that I've been hoping would happen, the one that gets him sent away for a long time at least. Great writing with this as usual, and hope that you have many a happy day.
Kruste posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 8:58am
Yay! Some action. And Feelings. And everything else... keep up the good Work.
miguel spain posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 8:41am
Not bad I really enjoy it you are doing a very good job and I can ´t wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon see ya.
the DragonBard posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 8:40am
Just like to point out that, in canon Marvel, phasing doesn't protect against magic or psionics.
Harry's teleportation can't be all that strong, otherwise he could time-space-dimensional teleport like Magik could, as well as interstellar or intergalactic teleport like that one mutant can.
So, they want to kidnap Jean? They're lucky she isn't at Phoenix level powers at this point.
larrylansday posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 8:16am
Great Chapter! I think you may have just got your self more readers. (This story has been suggested on a Harmony forum, but people there hate the fact that it was Harry/Ginny and Hermione/Ron. Some of them are more annoyed by the H/R than the H/G so you may have gotten a few readers... Its sad, but true.) In other news, very much enjoyed the after effects of Harry's adventure into the Goblin world. Enjoying the new Army. Your references to other stories amused me. Very much enjoying the seamless mix of both X-men and the Potterverse.
piad2691 posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 7:51am
Yes, yes, yes, now we are rocking! Harrys faith at the W.W. is almost like playing chess, one chesspiece is gone by every move by the players. And I must say, that the W.W. are doing everything in their power to overtake all the pieces that Harry have. And that wimp called Dumbledore, I really hope you have cooked up something nasty for him. See you all later...!!
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 7:17am
Comparing Scott and Logan to James and Sirius? Well, in their conversational styles, perhaps. Entertaining comparison, nonetheless.
Pansy leaving will only prove that Tracey and Daphne were right. As a side effect, you could have some of the mini-DE get upset at losing their "playthings" and try to start recuiting among the other houses. All sorts of friction you could generate in all sorts of directions if some 7th year Slytherin was caught trying to rape a 5th year 'Puff. AD tries to defend (he's all for sacrificing everyone for a 73rd chance for a psychotic rapist), other profs angry at AD and the student, the girls en-masse could lash out at the established problems . . . All sorts of possibilities if you wanted to go that way.
Good idea to make Hermione not quite perfect. Oh, and kudos for making Neville actually part of finding the solution. I rather like him and he's continually disregarded in canon.
Thundering Dung Bombs? Just so long as the Thunder also included a lightning strike. That passed through Mal-Ferret on the way.
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 6:55am
Great update, thanks.
AnnaTigg posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 6:43am
Welcome back, BobandAlyx. And once again, you return in style. I note that Alyx has not allowed you to force her into doing the Author's NOtes this time, Bob...Brilliant chapter, as usual - I hardly need to say it any more, as I always think your work is fantastic - I hope you don't mind me repeating myself...Loving the way the students are rejecting Dumbles' methods and doing their own thing - proving it's really only the adults (and baby Death Eaters) who are the sheep in the Wizarding World. I also love the ways you use the X-Men in this fic - Logan and Scott particularly - though Storm got to do her bit in this chapter! Scott's talent is proving exceptionally useful for disposing of Horcruxes, and the way the Carrows were brought down was brilliant. Glad Harry is confiding a bit more in his friends - it helps that he's confiding in those who are worthy of it - I particularly like your interpretation of Neville in this story. I can't think of anything else I especially want to comment on right now, so I'll just say well done and keep up the excellent work!
Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 6:16am
Funny as hell. Nice update...
joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 6:11am
Good chapter. Thanks for the update.
Ruth Smith posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 6:09am
Entertaining and brilliant as ever!
NeilDingley posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 5:07am
Excellent Chapter, Though I almost hoped that second thundering dung bomb was for Dumbledoor :-), and am I evil for hoping your going to arrange for that vanishing cabinet to be somewhere Lethal when Voldie send his Death Eaters though, say suspended over a pit of magma (or in Alyx's playroom) with Anti-apparation and Portkey wards to ensure they cant escape their fate :-)
James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 5:00am
oooh that was a good one... as usual you have shown us your devoted and totally clueless fans that you are the best hp au fanfic writers on the planet or at least the best damn standard declaimers storytellers in the world with alot of copycats trying but failing miserable in trying to copy your standard declaimers themselves!!!
now as for tumshie...yeah alx take that drill and drill out his pee hole maybe that will get him to finally start to work on his Independence Day story...
Now I can ask ya'll to kick some author's butt but I would never ever dream of asking ya'll to kick your own butts on a story now would I, since you all have clearly stated that we'uns just might find ourselves taking a bunji jump with out rope to the very center of the earth if we even tried...