By Bobmin
Reviews
darkleaf posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 11:20am
A good chapter. Can't wait to see what Harry's friends have planned.
on another note... Was 'Evolutionary Revolution' the basis for this story? I've noticed that story listed as 'coming soon' on your fanfiction.net page for a while now, and the summary seems to fit Mutant Storm's.
esenez posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 8:57am
hi! i just read your entire story this far and wanted to say i LOVE it! im obsessed with Harry Potter and X-men and have never found a story that puts them together in a way that seems at all possible. you finally did it! yay! cant wait for the next part. 10/10!!
Melissa posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 9:01pm
Excellent! I do so love your stories!
As for the penguins, check Northrend, just west of ToC. I've heard that the Occultists have an entire herd on their hands and all they do is stand around and look pretty. May as well put them to work! XD
Looking forward to the next installment!
Jeremy Adler posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 8:35pm
Good chapter!
I'm still curious. Is Dumbledore in this story like the one in the SOB series, or like the one in "Dumbledore's Army"? He seems to care about the students here, but he still manipulates some people.
Keep up the good work.
bonzo86 posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 8:02pm
Best Skeeter exit ever. Really enjoying the story even if I've only ever seen the Xmen movies.
BJH posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 2:28pm
OK, you can have Rickman but I'm keeping the Speedo.
BJH
marcelhm posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 12:41am
Well folks thank you for this great xmas pressent, an update on one of my favorite stories and another plot turn I didn't see coming too! :D. Don't have much more to say about the chapter since I'm still feeling kinda stupefied, except for a big lol at the xavier wolverine part.
Till the next time
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 11:13am
Oh EXCELLENT! WOWOWOWOW! and I don't refer to your "other" obsession! ;-D
This is a great update. Let me see...
Hermione/Neville - excellent. Love the buildup "what everyone else can see" - so very nice.
The determination of the non-marked students to protect themselves and the school is great because it is so frequently Harry-led. It's nice to see them backing the pressure off of him for a bit.
I LOVE the bit in Gringotts with the Goblin craftsman. Absolutely superb - I was hoping you would bring True Silver into the story somehow, because I am really looking forward to learning more about its characteristics. The elements you introduced, like the Goblin city and the artisan and the heirloom pieces are all well thought out. The use of these things together in this way is unique to your story as far as I can tell - I've seen Harry hire a Goblin craftsman before, and I've seen Harry visit the Goblin living area before, but never have I seen him actually visiting an actual city to do business before. Neat idea.
Love the H/G interaction. It just feels very right - having Ginny declare that she was fighting "for Harry" is a great idea - you are absolutely right in that it is very infrequent that anybody fights for him.
All in all, a most satisfying update.
Oh, my dear hubby was inspired for a moment, and gave me a Frying Pan of Infinite Attacks for Christmas. I am so pleased! ;-D
LeprechaunJV posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 10:16am
Excellent!!!!!
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 7:32am
Outstanding chapter, I really like that the D.A. has taken Harry's advice and are making plans to deal with the Death Eaters in the school. The plans they are making are quite good too, they are such that they give Dumbledore a chance to do the right thing (not that he will) before they act. I really wish I had more to offer other than great job and thank you.
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 6:13am
You say 'Enjoy or don't'... Well I think I will enjoy.
I admire your story and don't plan on not reading it.
The plot is quite interesting and, whenever you do plan on updating, I will be here to read it. (Just a suggestion, maybe the llamas know somthing about where the penguins are???)
Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, both of you!
David Brookes posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 4:27am
Congratulations on such a great story - keep up the good work...
artaud91 posted a comment on Saturday 26th December 2009 3:51am
thanks very much for the fic
I was recommended this story by people on a forum and I'm glad I listened
after reading i will be sure to read your other works.
Kortir posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 10:05pm
I enjoyed!
Lots of great stuff this chapter. Nice job with the goblins- fairly par for the course, but good nonetheless. And yay for the little Harry/Ginny scene. Fluff for the win. :)
Jimmy posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 8:35pm
Happy Christmas, Merry New Year, and update soon!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORK! BOTH OF YOU...
KR2688 posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 4:55pm
I got to say at first the part about harry going soft was disconcerting. But later on when harry attacked and killed bella and lucy made it a little more in line with how harry's character is portrayed. Another thing is, and i know it is something reitereated a lot but Harry and Ginny do not make a good couple. Harry is much more suited for Hermione than Ginny. Ginny is a red head and as it is always described Ginny looks like Lilly. Hell the names sound almost alike. That's why Ginny and Harry neither look good together and/or as some are reading feel good together. But it is your fic and your decisions... this is just food for thought.
Bobmin356 replied:
We warned you that the ship was Harry/Ginny. You opened it anyway, why did you read it if you didn't like the ship? We even went as far as to include a special notice opening chapter warning off the Ginny haters.
Did you think we were kidding?
Nightwing510 posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 2:10pm
I liked the way you have the other students planning to side with Harry.
sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 10:44am
Once again, thanks for the update. I've re-read it about five times since it was posted. I look forward to the next update.
As for the missing penguins, check Snape's closet or Umbridge's suitcase :)
Have a wonderful holiday season and see you in the new year :)
Hagrid posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2009 8:20am
I never thought I would like Ginny, until I saw her in that flight suit. Puts her in a whole new light. I only mention the not liking her thing to get your goat, or Aberforth's goat I guess, as you seem more fond of Alpaca's, or is it llama's?. Another great chapter. Come to think of it, the last time I read anything by you that wasn't great was the poorly planned "please excuse Bob from class yesterday as his newly discovered self pleasuring toy would not leave him alone. Signed Bobs dad"
Keep up the good work and don't let the Half-Giants get ya down.
Zeta_One posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 5:04pm