Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 9:36am

Nothing says he has to attend Hogwarts to prepare for the fight or even still work with DD. Time to live somewhere else for awhile, I'd say.

Great chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

Michael69 posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 9:31am

Loved the chapter!...thought you guys went into early retirement. Nice to have you back!

Anon-e-mouse posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 8:54am

Very nice chapter, keep up with the good work.

The only mistake I picked up on was: [where Harry is remembering the conversation with Jean]
"That doesn't mean your crazy,"

surely this should be
"That doesn't mean you're crazy,"

(first implies ownership of craziness (always fun) and the second is you are)

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 7:50am

Interesting chapter; Umbitch *finally* on her way to Club Azkaban (hopefully with Dawlish not far away) and Dumbles was actually forced to get off the fence (drawing down on Rufus was a major escalation; Dumblesa never drew on Fudge). However, while Rufus had did SOME stupid things, he's not a complete loss; he *still* is offering Harry the training (not that he may need OR want it, after the practical he just put on using Dawlish as a training dummy). Meanwhile, Hermione and Ron need to do some major re-evaluations. (Not only of their relationship, but of themselves.)

justin4 posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 6:51am

god have i missed you guys. thank you so much. my stressed out horrid day is so much better now.

Tero Alanne posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 6:09am

You know, this is one of two stories that makes me go "yay!" when a new chapter comes out.

-one very grateful reader

Jason Karr posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:58am

I for one am looking forward to how you are going to deal with the deatheaters the school.

Mariposa posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:41am

Great chapter! I reread this story every few weeks because it seems when I do you update and I love it regardless. I love the chapter name! It's just perfect.

Lillias posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:33am

I have been reading your stories since you first started on this site, and yet again, you deliver a story that is well written, well thought out, and incredibly entertaining to read. Your writing style has evolved since Spiritus Crystallus and Dumbledore's Army (excuse me if they're in the wrong order as I'm sick and a little bit delirious with a moderate fever)making your stories read smoother and the flow of the story more believable. If ever you have the intention of writing and publishing original fiction, let me know and I'll start keeping an eye out for your books. Once again, I enjoy reading your stories and being whisked into your vision of what MAY have happened. I prefer to ignore the last 2 books and thoroughly enjoy your entertaining versions. Cheers, and keep on writing!

Lillias posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:32am

I have been reading your stories since you first started on this site, and yet again, you deliver a story that is well written, well thought out, and incredibly entertaining to write. Your writing style has evolved since Spiritus Crystallus and Dumbledore's Army (excuse me if they're in the wrong order as I'm sick and a little bit delirious with a moderate fever)making your stories read smoother and the flow of the story more believable. If ever you have the intention of writing and publishing original fiction, let me know and I'll start keeping an eye out for your books. Once again, I enjoy reading your stories and being whisked into your vision of what MAY have happened. I prefer to ignore the last 2 books and thoroughly enjoy your entertaining versions. Cheers, and keep on writing!

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:07am

Yes yes i do expect you to answer

DO IT NOOWWWWWW Bobble

damn good chapter i loved how dawlish got put down

Orion posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:48am

Great, thanks for the update. I'm happy that the rest of the world will finally be clued in to how off Britain is.

Thanks for the update!

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:45am

Thank you for making my day a bit brighter. There's nothing like overcooked angst percolated through a magical adolescent mind to make me feel normal.
*kowtow*

g

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:30am

Outstanding chapter!!!! I want to send a knuckleer device to anyplace you want to send it!!!! Will we be seeing Harry decide to fight for himself and his family???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!

Kruste posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:51am

Now, thats a Kick Ass Harry.

Jamey posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:48am

Wow! Just WOW! HOLY WOW!!!

And what happens if Harry reveals to the Americans that there are a couple of dozen, at least, marked Death Eaters attending Hogwarts as students, and one *TEACHING*, and that Dumbledore has known about it since the beginning of school, and done nothing about it?

Sooner or later, the question of phasing vs. Unforgivables is going to get tested. Truthfully, the way this is going, I'm going to have to expect the Crucio, and because Harry phased to let it go through, it'll hit Ginny, which will result in Harry going past fission and fusion, and straight to macroscopic quantities of antimatter. A few kilograms will do.

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:15am

Ah, it was time she was setting up the mail box for the mail man instead of the Llamas. Realy thats good to know. I truely dislike the USPS. Hey Alyx, anyway I can send you in your struggle against the USPS?

Great Chapter!!! Really liked the fight sequence at the end. I think Harry just learned that from now on at the first spell through to just phase and cast and stay phased until everyones down. If not he'll end up hurt.

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:50am

that was one hell of a chapter. It was about time Janie told Harry the true about both things.

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:47am

Great chapter. Guess Umbridge must have gotten a new wand, pity. Seems to me that Harry needs to spend more time with his dragon friend. I am interested to see what happens to the JrDEs, somehow I don't see Ginny, Hermione, Neville and Ron making a preemptive strike. Logan, maybe. There may be a slight inconsistancy about whether or not Black castle is concealed or not, it seems like the story says it is concealed and then has student assembling in the courtyard... Even if true such a minor thing hardly diminishes my enjoyment of your efforts. Thanks for writing. W.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:46am

Pretty interesting update, it's nice to have a reason for Harry behaving so emotionally. Gotta let his bratty, average teenage behavior slide under these circumstances.

Looking forward to more.